Reflection: I had nothing to reflect on because no one watched or commented on my video so I did not change much from my first video other than slowing down my speech a bit.
HI Kristie, you did a great job on your second elevator pitch attempt! It must have been frustrating trying to revised based off of feedback when you did not receive any but I am impressed with the fact that you were self-=aware enough to spot out something that you thought needed to be improved (the fast / slow you were speaking). I think you did a great job describing your product and portraying confidence. Overall, well done & keep up the good work!
Hi Kristie, Creating a second draft with no outside feedback is a tough challenge. Going beyond what your first elevator pitch had in it, incorporate what you have learned from the class, the other assignments, and your peers’ comments on those other assignments. There can be revealing and thought-provoking commentary which can in turn improve your next few drafts. Great job and keep posting!
Hi Kristie! I giggled a bit when I read your caption for your elevator pitch attempt 2. Thats how I felt about my video too so I didn't change much. It's good that you redid it and tried to improve from your last video. Describing your product and showing how confident you are in it is a 10/10. Great job!!
HI Kristie, you did a great job on your second elevator pitch attempt! It must have been frustrating trying to revised based off of feedback when you did not receive any but I am impressed with the fact that you were self-=aware enough to spot out something that you thought needed to be improved (the fast / slow you were speaking). I think you did a great job describing your product and portraying confidence. Overall, well done & keep up the good work!
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ReplyDeleteCreating a second draft with no outside feedback is a tough challenge. Going beyond what your first elevator pitch had in it, incorporate what you have learned from the class, the other assignments, and your peers’ comments on those other assignments. There can be revealing and thought-provoking commentary which can in turn improve your next few drafts. Great job and keep posting!
Hi Kristie! I giggled a bit when I read your caption for your elevator pitch attempt 2. Thats how I felt about my video too so I didn't change much. It's good that you redid it and tried to improve from your last video. Describing your product and showing how confident you are in it is a 10/10. Great job!!
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